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Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Non Linear Writing

UPCOMING ADULT FICTION WRITING CLASS DATES:
MONDAY 9/12 6-8 Classroom at Ann Peden Jewelry and Artist Marketplace
MONDAY 9/26 6-8 Classroom at Ann Peden Jewelry and Artist Marketplace
Contact Ann to register:

Ann Peden Jewelry

1431 Capital Ave
Suite 109
Watkinsville, GA 30677
706-769-2656
store@annpedenjewelry.com


Many people write the same way they travel. They have to gas the car, travel each mile, and then arrive at their destination. They rely on an outline, and then can write chapter after chapter in perfectly logical order.

But no one HAS to think that way. And no one MUST write that way.

Everyone can be non-linear.

If I say to you "Paris, France," you immediately have an image in your head, whether it's this one:


Or not. Depending on who you are, you might think of Ratatouille or Little Mermaid or Beauty and the Beast. You might think of Les Miserables. You might think about french painters or french cuisine. Perhaps an image pops into your mind of Napoleon, the Arc de Triomphe de l'Étoile, or the Eiffel Tower. What you thought of doesn't really matter. My point is, you did not have to get on a plane or open a book to imagine immediately something directly related to Paris. Non linear writers get that.

Everything we write comes from imagination or memory. In the same way, every person has a slightly different view of Paris based on their experiences. And non-linear writers use those experiences to tell the stories they are most excited about telling. Here's the difference:

When you get home from a trip and tell your best friend all about it, you might tell about what happened out of order. This is called Stream of Consciousness. You remember things as they come to you, and sometimes your friend interjects, and that reminds you of something else, and sometimes you lose your train of thought. You can read non linear writing in flashbacks and foreshadowing and dreams and memories, even from linear writers.



But in non-linear writing, the goal is (usually) a linear plot. And depending on whether your story is plot driven or character driven, you will feel compelled to write major scenes of your story. It's almost a compulsion -- it's the dream you don't want to forget or this historic moment that you are chronicling for posterity. You MUST write this scene if you are a non-linear writer, in the same way that you MUST tell your friend about certain aspects of your vacation.

So plotting when you are non-linear still happens, just in a different way that linear people plot. Non-linear writers might make a list of five things that they expect to happen in their book. Or, they may write each scene not knowing where or how it fits, without making any sort of list. When a few of these scenes have been written, whether you are listening to characters or stopping along a roadside or kicking the bad guy's ass, you'll start to see where you want to go and what you need to do to tie those pivotal scenes together.

Imagine it like this:





You have a list of errands you need to accomplish. Meet a friend for lunch, get a deli tray for work, drop books off at the library, buy stamps at the Post Office, and buy flowers for your mother. You may write all these things down, and then you might place them in a logical order so you can save gas and flow with traffic. But the library and post office have specific opening and closing times, "lunch" with your friend should be midday, and you shouldn't leave a deli tray (or a floral arrangement) in your car any longer than you have to. If you're like me, you have noble intentions of hitting the library and post office before lunch, but since they weren't open before 8, when you left the house to take the kid to school, you putter around your house until five minutes AFTER you should have left to meet your friend, spend longer catching up than you intended (which you are not at all upset about) and then have to get everything else done in a rush before picking the kid up from school. 

So long as everything on your list gets done by the end of the day, you can count it a success. And if you were constantly blocked from your intended plan by obstacles, then you have the means for a great story that will make your readers do this:



And isn't that what we all want from our readers?

So to practice, comment with the events of your day, in some crazy harried style. Or, write about a journey from your imagination. Anything is possible for Authors, Mothers -- or not, and Dreamers!






Phyl Campbell is Author, Mother, Dreamer. She writes on a variety of topics: Education, Women/Feminism/Equality, Book Reviews, and Writing. Her books are available on AmazonIf you'd like to see her speak at an upcoming function, contact her via her website or Facebook page.



   

Tuesday, August 2, 2016

Published Books

I can't believe I have neglected to mention the first two GEORGIA books published through my creative writing workshop!!!

Six and a half year old Payton Ledford published I See a Rainbow. Payton drew all the pictures herself and dictated the story to me. Rainbow qualifies as a non-fiction PreK-Grade 2 textbook. In the book, you will learn the colors of a rainbow, where to find them, and that her favorite color is PINK!!

I See A Rainbow, available in Paperback or Kindle on Amazon.


Her sister is ten year old Kayden Ledford. Kayden published The Three Best Friends. This is a book about friends and working to keep friends from becoming frenemies. I can see this book being really popular with 8-12 year olds who are having a rough time with friends.

The Three Best Friends, available in paperback and Kindle on Amazon.com

You've got to check both of them out, along with all the books by the Arkansas Young Authors!!



Phyl Campbell is Author, Mother, Dreamer. She writes on a variety of topics: Education, Women/Feminism/Equality, Book Reviews, and Writing. Her books are available on AmazonIf you'd like to see her speak at an upcoming function, contact her via her website or Facebook page.

Friday, July 22, 2016

Dates and a Guest Blog Post Link

OK. Here are some dates:
Saturday, July 23 -- 11AM West Broad Farmer's Market
 I'll be doing storytime, handing out blank books for people to stop and make a book with, and all that jazz. Athens, GA!!



Tuesday, July 26 -- 1-4PM Ann Peden - Jewelry and Artist Marketplace
I'll be holding the PENULTIMATE Make A Book Summer Workshop for 2016.
Watkinsville, GA!!




And the AWA allowed me to guest post on their blog again. I really appreciate being part of this fantastic group. This is a guide to formatting in MSWord for CreateSpace.


(Kudos and thanks to Katherine for the beach scenes!!)

I am getting better about formatting and teaching myself better practices for formatting books for Kindle as well as POD. I'd love to help you see yourself in print -- contact me!!

Comments are always welcome, whether here or on my FB page. Same goes for LIKES, SHARES, and offers of canned Dr. Pepper (though we may have to do that in person).

Friday, July 15, 2016

New Time for Workshop and Two "Save the Dates"

Hey -- just letting everyone know that the Watkinsville Make a Book Workshop has a new time. As always, your group of three or more can call Ann and set up your own time if you like -- perfect for your club, organization, scout troup, or summer-camp/pre-school boredom buster! Call 706-769-2656 for details!


And then "Save the Date"


Back by popular demand August 23 and 30!!  



Friday, July 8, 2016

Embrace Your Weird

Too many parents come to me worried that I will think their kids are weird.

Of course they are weird.

And I am their Queen.

Think about it. Tell someone from 50 years ago that a lot of us would spend our time on our phones looking at pictures of cats and arguing with people we'd never met about politics. Even if they believed us -- they'd think we're pretty weird.

We like zombies and fairy tales and I've heard that hammer pants might be making a comeback. That's weird.

And when the alternative is looking like every other body that comes along?

I hope you'll choose weirdness, too.

Embrace Your Weirdness, and join me Saturday, if you're local or able to visit:

Friday, June 24, 2016

Obama Cries, Dems Sit In, Ryan Shuts Down, Love Must Win

I think SUCKS is the harshest word I use in this post, because I wanted to be able to share it with parents who could share with their kids. And it was hard because I feel this issue on a lot of levels. So please read it and think about it and talk about it. I wrote it because I care. A lot of ideas. A lot of videos to share. A lot of information. It is a political post, but I don't think it should be couched in political terms. I feel like it is a life or death post. And until you know someone who has been shot and killed, I think you can't understand. I don't wish that understanding on you. No one should lose anyone else to gun violence.

I know a guy in jail for murder. He's been there since before I was 20. I don't know if legislation would have stopped him from getting the gun that he used to kill, but he's spent more time in jail than out of jail for less than "20 minutes of action." He can't take back what he did. And it sucks. And I still think we need to do more. Maybe nothing would have saved the guy I knew. But maybe smart people can help save someone else.

Dick Cheney shot a man in the face during a hunting trip and he didn't even apologize. The man who was SHOT apologized. And maybe that was the right thing, but it seems pretty bizarre to me. Poor kid gets decades in prison but rich guy doesn't even have to say sorry. Sounds legit.


This video of POTUS Obama was taken 6 months ago. And it could have been the same speech after the Orlando shooting. Ending gun violence is more important than owning guns right now. I am tired of shootings. I lost a lovely friend to a school shooting. I was in the building when my friend (a professor in his last year before retirement) saved hundreds of us by taking the gun-wielding student into his office. He had to know that he wouldn't ever come out again. It was senseless.

About the Sit In Staged by Dems:

I support the sit-in that just happened. I don't care that Paul Ryan calls it posturing. The alternative is dead people. I am SO TIRED of moments of silence for dead people. We have to do more. We have to acknowledge the NEED to do more.


I had no idea that John Lewis was part of the Civil Rights Movement in Selma until I saw this video. It makes me proud to live in Georgia now -- in spite of the Trump supporters in the state.


Here he is at the sit in. I think he understands, like I do, that leaving the problem for tomorrow has been the problem. And one bill isn't going to solve it. It's going to take A LOT. But we have to start at lots of somewheres. We have to help law enforcement and we have to better police our law enforcement. We have to stop turning blind eyes to things that do not directly concern us. We have to do more.

I think loopholes that allow people without licenses to buy and sell at gun shows should be closed. If you have a license and can pass a background check, your life is not affected by this. Or it is made better, in the way that we have laws protecting us against unlicensed and uninsured motorists.
Speaking of, I think all gun owners should have accidental death and injury insurance. TWENTY kids EVERY DAY are hospitalized for gunshot wounds. If gun owners aren't paying for their care, than either victims or their families are paying for their own care or every taxpayer is footing the bill for the emergency room treatment, rehab, and therapy of gunshot victims. And if you/we can't afford that, then can you/we afford the gun and the inherent risk of owning it?

I have paintball guns. They aren't lethal. They look like "real" guns. Their ammo stings. If I point it at someone, s/he may think twice about coming on my porch and figuring out if my gun will kill or not. If I shoot someone with a paintball gun, I will likely leave a bruise but it's unlikely I will kill them. Who needs more than that? Honestly?


Guns and domestic violence:

I think we should take domestic violence more seriously than we do in this country. Background checks are a joke right now because domestic violence is not discovered and prosecuted the way it needs to be. Maybe then this talented singer, Christina Grimmie, wouldn't be dead. She died the same weekend as the nightclub shooting, also in Florida. And she won't get half the attention of Michael Jackson or Prince because another tragedy happened too soon after hers. Too bad nobody killed her on a slow news week.


The Pulse night club shooter had a history of domestic violence. And after the shooting, his WIFE was taken in for questioning. How much sense does that make? But in this country, we blame victims for the things done to them all the time. We proved that most recently when a man was convicted of THREE FELONIES against a girl who was unconscious and the judge only gave him a six month sentence. Worried that jail would be bad for HIM. I never want that guy to own a gun. I don't want his victim to fear his retaliation for his pathetic jail sentence. We already know he doesn't believe he was responsible. We know he isn't remorseful. How much more are we willing to put up with? How fast can you swim? Hold long can you breathe underwater?

I want to stick to the facts, but it's hard not to be emotional. The FACT is people are dying because people intend to kill them or people are not using their guns safely. The FACT is that we don't respect and prosecute domestic violence in this country, and our inaction leads perpetrators to even greater acts of violence. The FACT is that black lives matter, and we have a history of unarmed black people getting shot by cops at alarming rates. The FACT is that we have such a big mess in this country -- a huge KNOT -- that there is no wrong place to start in unraveling the thing. We have to find a place, dig in, and work carefully, piece by piece, to unravel the thread.

We can't uncut any threads of lives we have lost. We can use what we have learned from those losses. The sit-in may be over, but gun violence isn't. It's a massive issue with tons of moving parts. But the killers behind the guns cannot win. We have to make sure only love can.

Finally -- For the other arguments:


"Some people are on the No Fly list that shouldn't be." That doesn't mean that everyone on the No Fly list is innocent. I think #noflynobuy is sensible gun legislation. If you find out you're on it and shouldn't be, get help to get off it. "Everybody wants to take my guns." Are you a mass murderer? Are you planning to kill someone? Then I don't know who you think is planning to take your gun. Police are far too busy prosecuting real crimes -- and if they aren't, then they should be, and we need to work on THAT. Not protecting every mass murderer out there because you're afraid of someone taking your TOY. Your very deadly toy. "People commit mass homicide with things other than guns." Yeah, and it's been addressed by legislature.

"I need a high speed weapon for XYZ." Then you don't need a gun, you need more practice with video games. If you can't hit the broad side of a barn without an assault rifle, you need a good gun instructor and to NOT TOUCH a gun until you have respect for it. Many people buy a gun for protection only to have it used against them. Don't be a statistic.

I know there are more. I am beyond caring. "I see dead people." And they didn't have to be dead. To continue to protect the murderers is to exercise complete disregard for human life. Too bad if you don't get it. Grow up and grow a conscience. Play video games or laser tag, like my son does. Find a new hobby. I promise, you are not a well regulated militia, either because you are not a militia or because if you are a militia, I doubt you are well regulated. I will refrain from suggesting you are illiterate, or lacking critical thinking skills, but such questions remain the elephants in the room, if you catch my drift. The second amendment does not apply to you. Your argument is invalid.
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Phyl Campbell is Author, Mother, Dreamer. She writes on a variety of topics: Education, Women/Feminism/Equality, Book Reviews, and Writing. Her books are available on AmazonIf you'd like to see her speak at an upcoming function, contact her via her website or Facebook page.
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Tuesday, June 7, 2016

Venue for Writing Class!!

I'm so pleased to announce that my
class will be held at the 
in Watkinsville, GA.








Ann truly understands the need for artists to be creative while someone else handles the business end of things. I feel like a HUGE weight has been lifted from my shoulders.

First class will be Tuesday, June 14, from 9-12. 


Here are samples of books from last year:

And a link to all the titles available on Amazon.

I also have a new pamphlet/brochure. You can see it here: